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Okey, it looks like it's a big, stinking NO for my application for becoming a member in [livejournal.com profile] aific. I can live with that. Some of the "no" comments went over the requirement of polite concrit, though, judging the fic for its pairing and not for its quality. Most of them just commented on the "oddness" of the writing, asking if the fics were betaed (yes, they were), unintentionally catching me for being a non-native speaker.

But the thing? The thing is that one of the commenters remembered that my Adam/Danny fic had been ripped to shreds in the comments in ontd_ai's badfic post, and that my fic was the source of the "I have no problem with your gay" -thing. OMG LOL! I hadn't known that! I mean, how hilarious is that! I always liked that tag. (And I'm still standing behind that wording in the fic, by the way.)

So, my fic wasn't only Not Good Enough, So No Thanks, but actually So Bad We Have to Ridicule You. But I asked it myself when I applied, so everything is good.

Date: 2009-07-19 03:53 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] emmuzka.livejournal.com
Oh, thanks for the offer, I will take you up for it ;) I have a few things in the the works, and I will ask an oddity-check when they are ready.

For the foreign thing, it's pretty frustrating that "good for a foreign" doesn't really cut it. I would never mention it in my author notes, for example, because that would be like I would be asking for going easy on me, or saying that the story sucks. It's actually pretty interesting that you could pick my stuff out in anon_lovefest; I'm totally blind for those nuances, obviously.

Date: 2009-07-19 04:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] naotalba.livejournal.com
Author's notes that say, "non-native speaker" are a complete turn-off for me, too. You don't want to be "good for a foreigner" -- you just want to be good, period. I think your writing is very strong content-wise, but like you say, you are blind to some grammar and syntax issues. The only way you could totally avoid that would be to live here for a decade or two.

It can be fixed with an extra beta run-through, though, as long as you can recognize that there is an issue. For instance, I would disagree with the phrasing of "I have no problem with your gay." Either "I have no problem with your being gay," "I have no problem with your gaying it up," or "I have no problem with gays," would all be more common phraseology.

Date: 2009-07-19 05:15 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] emmuzka.livejournal.com
Yeah, the "I have no problem with your gay"- thing, which was seen so incomprehensible that it ended up as the "gay issue" -tag in ontd_ai; The person saying that is a devoted christian that believes that being gay is a choice. So I meant him saying it the same way that one would say "I have no problem with your STD" or "I have no problem with your HIV." I don't know it if it works that way, but that was what I meant.

Date: 2009-07-20 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lumiyu.livejournal.com
That's how I read it, but then, finnish also.

While I agree that I wouldn't want to be 'good for a foreigner' either, I think having that in the notes might not be a bad thing if it's an issue. I'd rather people think I'm foreigner than them thinking I'm some kid who doesn't know how to use beta :/. (Although having native beta might fix the issue.)

Date: 2009-07-20 06:04 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] emmuzka.livejournal.com
Nah, I think that any mention of the writer writing in other than her native language would be considered as a disclaimer stating that the fic is bad. Harsh, I know. But, I have always loudly stated that (putting it harshly,) fic communities are not special ed schools where everyone deserves a golden star for trying. There are no easier classes for foreigners and beginners, nor there should be. I'd rather be a bad writer in the "normal" class than a good writer in the "special education."

Date: 2009-07-20 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teroyks.livejournal.com
When I saw that phrase I automatically assumed it was an attempt at whedonspeak. Something along the lines of, "I can't brain today, I have the dumb".

Date: 2009-07-20 06:06 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] emmuzka.livejournal.com
Haa, if only! I would love to master that, instead of accidentally inventing a tag line.

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