emmuzka

Me:

I have no idea what it was all about. And not in a good way. The might
have been a Mary Sue, somewhere..?

Actually, this is just what happens when I try to write at one in the
morning. Hopefully the rest of it'll make sense (If there is a rest of
it, I may let it go at the other part).

The dad character's based on a real person, but the girl's not. This was
all just the "how'd we get here." It's pretty unimportant, really.

She linked the fic to a community, and she might just let it go? (Sorry, no direct link to the fic because she friendslocked the fic after my comment. Great way to make disable any future dialog between us.) If she hadn't done it, I would have commented her how it was disrespectful to post a fic unbetaed and be all "whatewah!" about even continuing it.

And the sad thing is that this kind of crap quality makes *me* want to post unbetaed crap, too. Thankfully that desire is directed only towards